I wrote that last bit after a student was killed a few months back at school. It really bothered me to be so close to the idiotic violence and ignorance at a University. I could go on. I will get to my ranting at some point. Anyway, the story was an hard one to write and I am really unsure of it. Feel free to let me know what you think. Does it strike you? What do you read from it? I don't know. Thanks and have fun.